Review

The feedback from Jodie Smith contained 2 points on which I had to address in my scripts. One of them being that the show has a relatively small budget to work with and one of my sketches was set in a posh restaurant so I had to change the scenery to a less posh restaurant to keep in with the budget. In my opinion, this has taken some comedy out of the script as the beginning was in contrast with the end as it was supposed to be an extremely posh/ expensive restaurant and the waiter sits down and eats the food off the man and woman's plate but it is still easy to work around.

The other point is about copyright with me using the name 'ET' and whether it would be allowed to be used. So to prevent any issues occurring I changed the name to 'TE'. In my opinion it adds another comic dimension to the script as people may not know from the beginning what the script is about but as it goes on they will then realise that it is based on the film 'ET'.

When creating scripts, they have to be ran by several people before they can even be considered to be made into a finished product. Having written my own scripts and receiving feedback I feel as I now have a better understanding on what scripts/ script writers have to go through before they can be finalised.